Great old skool dub sounding track and mix. However, I think a little more excitement could be created with the mix. You'd have to really tweak on the proper EQ frequencies for each instrument, nail the blend or mix of the instruments, tweak the hell out of the dub effects, and then "master" the 2 buss to make it kick or pump a little.
Overall though, I like the ideas and the old skool dub sound/mix, though.
