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Post by christy » Fri Jan 20, 2006 7:06 am

its the first track 'dub one'. <BR> <BR>What do you think?

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Post by christy » Fri Jan 20, 2006 7:07 am

you'll need the website as well <BR> <BR><a href="http://www.myspace.com/thatsmurkage" target="_blank">www.myspace.com/thatsmurkage</a> <BR> <BR>thanks.

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Post by Neil C » Fri Jan 20, 2006 10:30 pm

The bass is very low in the mix. Which is kind of odd for dub. I would count it as low in even a non-dub recording. And it has a very strange sound to it, like its doubled up somehow, come to think of it I wouldn't mix that sound in very loud either. And no low frequency bass oomph either. <BR> <BR>You've got some other very nice sounds in there. They have a smooth lushness. Nice manipulations and playing of the guitar. <BR> <BR>The drums are a bit woolly sounding. They need more punch and they sound a bit big and fat 80's like an old drum machine to me. <BR> <BR>I think you could do with eq'ing elements in to their own frequency spaces - I think you have elements competing for the same sonic space which is clouding things. The mid-range sounds/reverb have too much bass end which could do with being rolled off. <BR> <BR>I can very much imagine this turning into something very good in this if all the mix issues, and bass sound/part were dealt with. <BR> <BR>I listened to the others - you have serious issues with distortion. <BR>You need an equipment upgrade I think. <BR>Your strength appears to be guitar.

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Post by christy » Fri Jan 20, 2006 11:42 pm

i dont have a bass guitar so i use my normal 6-string guitar,but i use the 'whammy' function on my multi FX to change the pitch to an octave lower.thats why the bass doesnt sound right.The drum machine is shit as well,i dont have a proper one im using the drum machine on my multi FX which is very limited and sounds too cheesy, i really wanna get a new one. Im using a seconhand TASCAM portastudio to record the whole mix.Its hard to get a good sounding mix because there is only 2 eq buttons on the thing. <BR> <BR>What drum machine would you recommend? <BR> <BR>Thanks for the feedback,it was very detailed.Have you got any of your songs i could listen to?

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Post by interruptor » Sat Jan 21, 2006 9:05 am

Neil recently asked for feedback in this discussion: <BR><a href="http://www.interruptor.ch/cgi-bin/discu ... /1075.html" target="_blank">http://www.interruptor.ch/cgi-bin/discu ... 75.html</a> <BR> <BR>His music page is here: <BR><a href="http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemus ... dID=140824" target="_blank">http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemus ... =140824</a>

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Post by Neil C » Sat Jan 21, 2006 1:39 pm

Your'e doing well with a limited setup. <BR> <BR>I guess you are lacking cash - but if you got a decent soundcard for your computer &#40;I don't know if you have one of your own&#41; you could do it all from within the computer &#40;and be able to record you guitar into it&#41;. There is a lot of free/cheap software out there that could give you a much better setup than you have now. So if you had a fast enough computer all you would need was a decent soundcard. <BR>Of course there's masses of commercial software. <BR> <BR>I'm not familiar with drum machines really - there is a lot of drum software for computer. <BR> <BR>Alesis have just launched a product that look to be a very good option for someone starting a computer setup <BR><a href="http://www.alesis.com/product.php?id=93" target="_blank">http://www.alesis.com/product.php?id=93</a> <BR> <BR>and might be of interest to the others on this forum. <BR> <BR>They are multi-channel mixers with a firewire audio interface - at a very low price &#40;for what you get&#41;. They come with a bundled version of CubaseLE. <BR>There is a whole load of other product out there though, a lot of which has a free multi-track software included.

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Post by Neil C » Sat Jan 21, 2006 1:42 pm

Thanks for the links Interruptor.

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Post by christy » Sun Jan 22, 2006 2:51 am

yeah thats true mate, but for some reason i like to stick to 'old skool' method of recording even tho this makes my music a lot more limited.I think ive got a decent soundcard,what programs could i get for free? <BR> <BR>Thanks for the help.Your tunes sound big!!

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Post by Neil C » Sun Jan 22, 2006 1:32 pm

<a href="http://www.hitsquad.com/smm/win95/MULTITRACK_RECORDING/" target="_blank">http://www.hitsquad.com/smm/win95/MULTI ... ORDING/</a> <BR> <BR>This is the first page I cam across that has shareware multi track recording software, although the ones I had a quick look at aren't entirely free - they cost about £20 to use after the demo period. <BR>I'm sure I could find more if I tried. <BR>I don't know how good they are. <BR> <BR>If you want to keep it hardware then a digital multi-tracker like this Zoom one might be up your street &#40;seen on Google for £430&#41; <BR><a href="http://www.soundonsound.com/sos/jan05/a ... rs1608.htm" target="_blank">http://www.soundonsound.com/sos/jan05/a ... 608.htm</a> <BR> <BR>But one way or the other you really need, at the least, to address those bass and drum sounds. At the moment they are like a demo for bass and drums, rather than bass and drums themselves.

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